Ohhhh, so good. I could practically taste the chocolate cake, and the banana. We won't mention the rising tension. Fantastic start, looking forward to the next edition.
I promise not to mention the tension either… but I might lean into it even harder next chapter. Just saying. 😏 Thank you so much for reading my chapter!
Love this! This is actually one of my favorite god-tier tropes. I love the staunchy hero turned feral, their is nothing better than to see a a prim and proper unravel and lose control over their woman
GREAT start! Looking forward to reading more. I love the deliciousness of the forbidden. Looking forward to seeing how she and Evander are going to figure out how to break the hold her ex has on her. What deals are going to be made... and broken? Who is going to die so these two can have their forever? LOVE the possibilities.
This is amazing! I couldn't look away even if I wanted to, you had me hooked from the first sentence. I love the super powerful magical woman on a leash. The eye tattoo is a great way to make their love not just forbidden but impossible. The longing, the confidence it just pulled me right in.
"Gold star" 🤣💚
Loved it!
Can't wait for the next one.
And this makes me excited for the novel you keep procrastinating 🤣
Thank you! I’m so glad you loved it.
My novel knows I’m cheating on it. It’s being very dramatic about it.
Love it! I’m hooked! Wonderful imagery—I could imagine everything perfectly. 🤩
Thank you! I take “I could imagine everything” as the highest praise…
especially when things get increasingly unhinged. ;)
I can’t wait to experience this fierce woman peeling all the formality away from this elegant young demon 🔥🔥🔥
“Most people just use their hands. That’s either the most erotic or the most repressed thing I’ve seen all week. Hard to tell.”
This was fantastic and I am so excited to keep reading. There were so many great lines, and I love Maren's character already.
Thank you! That line honestly came out of nowhere and made me cackle.
Thrilled you’re loving Maren. She hasn’t even started misbehaving yet.
Well I will be waiting only semi patiently.
Can't wait to delve into the next chapter this weekend. So many intriguing details sprinkled throughout...I want to know more about her story.
Ah, so you noticed the breadcrumbs. She’s not ready to tell you everything yet… but the cracks are showing.
Yes, indeed I noticed, not much can get past me. The anticipation! I quite like.
I loved this! You're a really wonderful writer 💕
Thank you so much, Barbara. 💖
I really enjoyed this. I'm hooked🤭
I’m so glad you’re enjoying it. Welcome to the spiral!
I love this! It was goooooood 😍😍😍
Ohhhh, so good. I could practically taste the chocolate cake, and the banana. We won't mention the rising tension. Fantastic start, looking forward to the next edition.
I promise not to mention the tension either… but I might lean into it even harder next chapter. Just saying. 😏 Thank you so much for reading my chapter!
Love this! This is actually one of my favorite god-tier tropes. I love the staunchy hero turned feral, their is nothing better than to see a a prim and proper unravel and lose control over their woman
Absolutely. Give me a man who starts with restraint and ends on his knees.
I'm hooked and obsessed!
Hooked and obsessed is my favorite kind of feedback.
Thank you for reading. And welcome to the descent.
I really enjoyed that. You have a way with your words ❤️
Thank you, Stephen. That means a lot—especially coming from someone who knows how to land a sentence.
Love it! Will be waiting for the next one! ♥️
Thank you, Kayla! I just finished Chapter 3 last night, and…
let’s just say they both make some questionable decisions.
Coming soon.
They’re only questionable if the reader questions them. I, for one, am prepared to accept them wholeheartedly. 😂😂
GREAT start! Looking forward to reading more. I love the deliciousness of the forbidden. Looking forward to seeing how she and Evander are going to figure out how to break the hold her ex has on her. What deals are going to be made... and broken? Who is going to die so these two can have their forever? LOVE the possibilities.
Thank you! I’m thrilled you’re here for the forbidden tension.
Because yes, something’s going to snap.
This is amazing! I couldn't look away even if I wanted to, you had me hooked from the first sentence. I love the super powerful magical woman on a leash. The eye tattoo is a great way to make their love not just forbidden but impossible. The longing, the confidence it just pulled me right in.
Thank you so much for reading. I’m so glad you’re feeling the pull between them. 🔥